Any Takers?

I've spent the entire day today and most of last night revising the beginning of BEAUTY SECRETS. So now comes the fun part, sending it out into the world and asking for a critique.

Would any of you fine folks be interested in reading the first 20 pages of my MS? I'm not looking for a line edit, but more of an overall opinion. Basically I'm wondering if I've set the story up enough to hook you, and if I've given you enough time to know my protagonist before diving into the mystery aspect of the novel.

My mantra for the last twelve hours has been, "Set up the story. You need to set up the story. Set up the story. You need to set up the story."

So...Let me know if you're down to help me out!

Thanks guys!